Teacher (2)

Describe a TEACHER who has greatly influenced you in your education
Outline:

• What she looked like
• Where you met him/her?
• What subject they taught?
• What was special about him/her
• Explain why this person influenced you so much.
  

SAMPLE 2:
Introduction:
The teacher I've chosen is Mr/Ms/Miss Lan. She taught me English in high school and has greatly influenced me.
Body:

Physically, she is quite tall and has a round face with a wavy hair. She has a dark complexion and a beautiful smile. She is a careful dresser and usually wears clothes of bright colors because it makes her look much younger.
In terms of personality,
Topic sentence: Ms Lan is full of vigor, devotes all his energies to teaching English and has high responsibility for the job.

• Support 1: She likes applying the elicitation method to make her students interested in what they are learning.
• Support 2: I remember the time before enrolling the university, I wondered if which major was suitable for me. I was so confused that I couldn't make up my mind. Then she helped me realize my strong points, think of the future carefully in order to make the right decision.
  

I’ll never forget him/her because Ms Lan taught me a lot about the love of my career, responsibility in life and the determination of achieving what I really desired.

Conclusion
In short, that's a teacher I love and respect very much.
See SAMPLE 1: TEACHER

Some USEFUL PHRASES can help you express your ideas:
Introducing your choice:

• The … I’ve chosen is …
• I can remember …
• There are many teachers who have taught me. They are all good and I have learned a lot from them. But Ms (name) who taught me ...(subject) in high school, is the teacher who has greatly influenced me .

Body:

1. Describing physical features
• He/she looked …
• Physically, he/she was …
2. Describing character
• Character-wise, he/she was …
• In terms of personality,

Conclusion:

1. Explaining the reason for your choice

• I’ll never forget him/her because …
  
• What … taught me was that …
• In short, that's a teacher I love and respect very much.